first of all ,I would like thank you for your kind help ,with that i have made great progess in english .i will always remember the time when you encourage me for the english speech contest.in these days,you devoted all your spare time to teach me .i

first of all ,I would like thank you for your kind help ,with that i have made great progess in english .i will always remember the time when you encourage me for the english speech contest.in these days,you devoted all your spare time to teach me .i
first of all ,I would like thank you for your kind help ,with that i have made great progess in english .i will always remember the time when you encourage me for the english speech contest.in these days,you devoted all your spare time to teach me .i felt very sorry,and you never complanied.when i won aprize,you even looked happy than me.i know that with your help,i wouldn;t have done so well.however ,reading is still headache for me ,so i"m writing to turn you for more advice.

first of all ,I would like thank you for your kind help ,with that i have made great progess in english .i will always remember the time when you encourage me for the english speech contest.in these days,you devoted all your spare time to teach me .i
first of all ,I would like [to:句式] thank you for your kind help ,with [which:非限制性定语从句] i[I] have made great progess in [E]english.[I]i will always remember the time when you encourage[d:过去时] me for the [E]english speech contest.in these[those:那些] days,you devoted all your spare time to teach me .i felt very sorry,and[but] you never complanied.when i won [the] aprize,you even looked happy[happier:比较级] than me.i know that with【out：句子的意思】 your help,i wouldn;t have done so well.however ,reading is still headache for[to] me ,so i"m writing to turn [to] you for more advice.

that 指代help，不是从句
I would like to
encouraged me in the
those teaching
never complain
but(and), happier
without
a headache
ask you for more advices

短文改错是10个错吧！
1. would like thank → would like to thank
2. with that → with which
3. you encourage me → you encouraged me
4. In these days → In those days
5. to teach me → to teachin...

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短文改错是10个错吧！
1. would like thank → would like to thank
2. with that → with which
3. you encourage me → you encouraged me
4. In these days → In those days
5. to teach me → to teaching me
6. and you never complained → but you never complained
7. looked happy → looked happier
8. with your help → without your help
9. still headache → still a headache
10. turn you → turn to you

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