初一小短文,帮我改错.如下：Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .Last summer We went to Guangzhou We visited the Yue Xiu park .We went shoping at the big supermarket But too tired and we didn't go to play We h

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初一小短文,帮我改错.如下：Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .Last summer We went to Guangzhou We visited the Yue Xiu park .We went shoping at the big supermarket But too tired and we didn't go to play We h
初一小短文,帮我改错.
如下：
Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .
It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park .
We went shoping at the big supermarket
But too tired and we didn't go to play
We had a good time .
And hope you can go to GangZhou one day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .

初一小短文,帮我改错.如下：Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .Last summer We went to Guangzhou We visited the Yue Xiu park .We went shoping at the big supermarket But too tired and we didn't go to play We h
Hello!everyone !I'm on duty today .
Today is Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We had went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park and went shoping at the big supermarket
But I felt too tired to go to play
We had a good time .
So hope you will go to GangZhou some day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .

你都写乱套了
Hello！everyone ！I 今天我值日。
第十三次是星期三 Aprill。
去年夏天
我们去广州
我们参观了越秀公园。
我们走在大超市购物
但太累了，我们没去玩
我们有很好的时间。
并希望有一天你能去赣州市。
这是所有。
谢谢你给我听。哪里不对哟.....

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你都写乱套了
Hello！everyone ！I 今天我值日。
第十三次是星期三 Aprill。
去年夏天
我们去广州
我们参观了越秀公园。
我们走在大超市购物
但太累了，我们没去玩
我们有很好的时间。
并希望有一天你能去赣州市。
这是所有。
谢谢你给我听。

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today is Wednesday thirteenth of April
we xisited yue xiu park and we went to shopping at a big supermarket，but we were tired and we didn't have relax time.
tahnks for your listen

We visited Yuexiu Park.
shopping
We were too tired to play.
I hope you can go there someday.

初一小短文,帮我改错.如下：Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .Last summer We went to Guangzhou We visited the Yue Xiu park .We went shoping at the big supermarket But too tired and we didn't go to play We h .帮我看看英语的短文改错能帮我改一下这篇短文改错吗? 麻烦帮给我短文改错的答案, 英语老师帮我做一下短文改错啊, 英语短文改错一行一错朋友帮我吧英语短文改错一行一错朋友帮我吧谁能用英语帮我翻译一篇小短文?很简单的.注意：必须生词要少,翻译成初一水平的!可适当地小改动一下,要尊重原意.我急需,写的好可追加悬赏分!~短文如下：我的梦想,是长大后做一个自由旅帮我把这篇英语短文改错改一下,谢谢了有没有大神能帮我做一下短文改错呜呜呜有没有无私的英语大神能进来帮我做下这道大题!短文改错好人们能不能帮我做一道短文改错真的很需要求大神帮我改一下这篇英语短文改错. The western festivals and Chinese festivais是什么意思知情人士请按照这个题目帮我写份英文小短文（初一水平）...跪求英语好的帮我看看这篇英语短文初一的水平有错的帮我改一下Hello, everyone, my name is ChuboYang, 12 years old. I come from shijia. I am glad we became friends and classmates. I enjoy learning, favorite subject is sports. I l 你们帮我忙,英语小短文写什么五年级英语小短文帮我写一篇短文填空帮我